Hello Heaven

Hello Heaven,

Heard you would be judging with how it ends
Heard I would be a stranger to all my friends
Heard the music would be alleluyah, hope there's highlife and not just the classicals
Hope we can hip hop to the musicals
Would the angels be on blue jeans, leather jackets or fancy kicks?
Don't tell me it's only white robes.
I'll be bored in less than a week.
Sorry for all the questions, mean no I'll intentions.
Would there be choir practice,I  hope heaven isn't all church service?
Help me not to lose faith, Jesus leave the parables and talk straight...



Written by Peter Nwanguma

Have a Wonderful day ahead,
Xoxo,
Dieko.

Comments

Unknown said…
such a beautiful poem! you are very talented! i would never be able to write like that!
Cia Black said…
What a beautiful and short lovely poem. Very well written.
rachael lalji said…
so beautiful and touching . A lovely piece to read
Unknown said…
Love this poem! May we all live life with kindness.
Anonymous said…
This is such a beautiful and heartfelt poem. Thank you for sharing your heart with us... Shell
Amanda said…
This is a beautiful piece and one that most people do not speak about. Thank you for sharing. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Daria said…
Very beautiful poem, feels so peaceful and serene to me. I need to start reading more poetry again.
Ithfifi said…
Very beautiful poem, you have a lovely writing style. As I read this it flowed beautifully through my head :)
Wiola and Mike said…
That's a very lovely peem. I wish I could write these beautiful sentences myself.. But not everybody is as talented :) Thanks for sharing your work with us!
Tiffany said…
I love how REAL this is! I feel like I can relate a lot, this is how I would be thinking too. I hope there's still rock music! And blogs? Haha!
jossy turner said…
Beautifully written, i love this
indra k said…
Beautiful tale of heaven differently curated from modern perspective.
Melanie said…
Such a lovely little read. I love a good poem or two. Nice to pass time especially when travelling on the train x
JNoteMusic said…
I have to say that sometimes church can drive us away. Not the building but the people and how they handle dealing with each other. I say, take it in stride. If it is for you, go and enjoy raising Gid’s Name in sweet praise and worship.
Cindy said…
I don't think He minds the questions, actually I think He enjoys them. Keep writing!
Unknown said…
What a great poem, love how it is so candid. Those are all questions I have myself.
I love how your poem addresses very specific questions. Thanks for sharing it with us!
mily said…
Beautiful poem...Will also share this with a friend of mine who also appreciates poetry a lot..
Emily Leary said…
What a beautiful and well written poem, you're obviously very talented. Such a lovely read.
Wow what a beautiful poem, lovely to read and thought provoking.
Unknown said…
That is deep! I like that piece. I can feel that the author just want to request for a change.
Mary Francis said…
Such a beautiful poem and very delicate words. Well done!
Victoria said…
I love your poem and it's so deep. Thanks for posting.
Unknown said…
This is a very beautiful and well-written poem, thank you for sharing.
ifillLife said…
Short but the message is clear. No one will ever know how heaven is until we know it ourselves.
Rosie said…
What a beautiful poem!! Thank you for sharing :)
Anonymous said…
Really Nice.. I like it alot.. Hehehe
Anonymous said…
This is a beautiful poem, very well written. I wish that I was able to write poetry. It was the one thing that I wish I could have done in high school and college. Thank you for sharing!
Emily Fata said…
Such beautifully written prose. I love the passion in the words that comes through in the writing.

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