Hello Heaven

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Hello Heaven,

Heard you would be judging with how it ends
Heard I would be a stranger to all my friends
Heard the music would be alleluyah, hope there's highlife and not just the classicals
Hope we can hip hop to the musicals
Would the angels be on blue jeans, leather jackets or fancy kicks?
Don't tell me it's only white robes.
I'll be bored in less than a week.
Sorry for all the questions, mean no I'll intentions.
Would there be choir practice,I  hope heaven isn't all church service?
Help me not to lose faith, Jesus leave the parables and talk straight...



Written by Peter Nwanguma

Have a Wonderful day ahead,
Xoxo,
Dieko.

Comments

Unknown said…
such a beautiful poem! you are very talented! i would never be able to write like that!
14 January 2018 at 11:41
Cia Black said…
What a beautiful and short lovely poem. Very well written.
14 January 2018 at 14:47
rachael lalji said…
so beautiful and touching . A lovely piece to read
14 January 2018 at 15:18
Unknown said…
Love this poem! May we all live life with kindness.
14 January 2018 at 15:30
Anonymous said…
This is such a beautiful and heartfelt poem. Thank you for sharing your heart with us... Shell
14 January 2018 at 16:02
Amanda said…
This is a beautiful piece and one that most people do not speak about. Thank you for sharing. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
14 January 2018 at 16:43
Daria said…
Very beautiful poem, feels so peaceful and serene to me. I need to start reading more poetry again.
14 January 2018 at 21:04
Ithfifi said…
Very beautiful poem, you have a lovely writing style. As I read this it flowed beautifully through my head :)
14 January 2018 at 21:27
Wiola and Mike said…
That's a very lovely peem. I wish I could write these beautiful sentences myself.. But not everybody is as talented :) Thanks for sharing your work with us!
14 January 2018 at 22:41
Tiffany said…
I love how REAL this is! I feel like I can relate a lot, this is how I would be thinking too. I hope there's still rock music! And blogs? Haha!
15 January 2018 at 05:21
jossy turner said…
Beautifully written, i love this
15 January 2018 at 07:15
indra k said…
Beautiful tale of heaven differently curated from modern perspective.
15 January 2018 at 17:47
Melanie said…
Such a lovely little read. I love a good poem or two. Nice to pass time especially when travelling on the train x
15 January 2018 at 20:25
JNoteMusic said…
I have to say that sometimes church can drive us away. Not the building but the people and how they handle dealing with each other. I say, take it in stride. If it is for you, go and enjoy raising Gid’s Name in sweet praise and worship.
15 January 2018 at 20:37
Cindy said…
I don't think He minds the questions, actually I think He enjoys them. Keep writing!
15 January 2018 at 21:27
Unknown said…
What a great poem, love how it is so candid. Those are all questions I have myself.
15 January 2018 at 22:57
Flora the Sweaterist said…
I love how your poem addresses very specific questions. Thanks for sharing it with us!
16 January 2018 at 04:50
mily said…
Beautiful poem...Will also share this with a friend of mine who also appreciates poetry a lot..
16 January 2018 at 13:58
Emily Leary said…
What a beautiful and well written poem, you're obviously very talented. Such a lovely read.
16 January 2018 at 16:39
Scrapbook Adventures said…
Wow what a beautiful poem, lovely to read and thought provoking.
16 January 2018 at 23:40
Unknown said…
That is deep! I like that piece. I can feel that the author just want to request for a change.
17 January 2018 at 03:20
Mary Francis said…
Such a beautiful poem and very delicate words. Well done!
17 January 2018 at 11:54
Victoria said…
I love your poem and it's so deep. Thanks for posting.
17 January 2018 at 20:50
Unknown said…
This is a very beautiful and well-written poem, thank you for sharing.
17 January 2018 at 23:57
ifillLife said…
Short but the message is clear. No one will ever know how heaven is until we know it ourselves.
18 January 2018 at 02:52
Rosie said…
What a beautiful poem!! Thank you for sharing :)
18 January 2018 at 18:18
Anonymous said…
Really Nice.. I like it alot.. Hehehe
18 January 2018 at 21:17
Anonymous said…
This is a beautiful poem, very well written. I wish that I was able to write poetry. It was the one thing that I wish I could have done in high school and college. Thank you for sharing!
21 January 2018 at 01:28
Emily Fata said…
Such beautifully written prose. I love the passion in the words that comes through in the writing.
6 February 2018 at 22:31
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